i need help...
im supposed to write a 500 word essay about me and all you guys know that i suck at intros. have any ideas on how i can start? nd plzplzplz help cuz this is like seriously very important. Im trying to get into this Bergen Academy nd plzplzplz help.
~Cherry~
posted by CTY Cherubs at 7:57 PM
6 Comments:
Try finding an interesting moment in your life, then use it as your intro with a catchy first sentence (i.e. I'll always remember... or Some people say... and branch off of it to say some more about yourself.
LMAO!are you applying for private school too? A good way to get help is:
-->go to yahoo answers
-->type in "help with college admission essay" and related stuff
-->and they'll help ya out
REMEMBER: do not be negative at all,
do not say you are a normal kid- make it so you sound interesting and they want you in their school, don't make a boring essay >_>, the best impression the reader can get from the essay after reading it is:
"oh man, I love this kid"
ooo guys thank u for helping me!
kaela i hope ur writers block thing goes away lol
so i should rite about pets, family member, heritage and make it start with an interesting moment in my life lol
and make myself sound like a super genius instead of a normal kid...sounds easy...lol
hehe cherry
mention your Armani Exchange shirts too!~~
cherry just rack your brains and think about the one thing that you think makes you really stand out or something that you particularly like about yourself and start off with that. we're learning about leads in school and i find that the best ones kind of all start off with funny stories that show about the character. or silly quotes and stuff.. i'm sure you can do it. =) good luck!!!
cherry just rack your brains and think about the one thing that you think makes you really stand out or something that you particularly like about yourself and start off with that. we're learning about leads in school and i find that the best ones kind of all start off with funny stories that show about the character. or silly quotes and stuff.. i'm sure you can do it. =) good luck!!!
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